lyrics/form

so this is what i have as of now.
havent decided on a title.

Intro

Verse 1:

Feels like I’m about to break
All that weight, too much to take
Bottled up, six damn years
How long more you gonna wait
Built a wall, piled up the hate
In my head, it’s code red
Passion’s gone, looking forlorn
Lost the game, what a shame

Pre-chorus:
(spoken)

Commitment plus responsibility
At the cost of myself, oh set me free

Chorus:

Tired, exhausted
Strength’s been depleted
Reason i’m fighting for
Doesn’t exist no more
Take all the pain away
Left to drown in dismay
Fire’s a shade of grey
Now hold on tight, we’re taking flight

Verse 2:

Flash and fade, running in my head
Toss and turn. what do I yearn
Everything that I’ve known
Leaves me now for my own
Turn away, I will be okay
Start tonight, I’ll be alright
Passion’s gone, we’ve said so long
Lost the game, what a shame

Pre-chorus

Chorus

Bridge (rap):

You’re boiling mad // It’s so bad //
Simmer down now // Wipe that frown //
Off your brow // Cause somehow //
You know // fo’ sho’ //
You don’t quit // under pressure //
Take a hit // prove you’re legit //
A fighter // just gotta go higher //
When you’re frozen with fear // no one will hear //
You’re like a bicycle // two-tired (ha-ha) //
Now get wired // get fired // and ready to go

OR

cause today was tomorrow yesterday // when your life becomes a cycle //
You’re like a bicycle // two-tired (ha-ha) //
Now get wired // get fired // and ready to go

Chorus

Break

Chorus

Outro

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guide for song

so here’s the whole track.

based on a looped motif played by the e gtr, expanded into the full song.

uses Em and Em pentatonic scale (in pre-chorus).

form:
intro [8], Verse 1 [8], pre 1 [2], chorus 1 [8], int [2], V2, P2, C2, bridge [8], C3, brk [4], C4, outro [4].